FFXIV Cinematic Intro Fan Sound Redesign

[Rowyne]

Nice effort.

However, I couldn't get over the fact that the sound was very low quality and actually sounded monaural.

There weren't nearly enough spell/ability sound effects. Very little impact effects.

The music wasn't very Final Fantasy.

Most of the voice overs sounded awkward.

Sorry to be so critical, but I'm afraid I like the original better. Keep working at it!

[Ashra]

Nice effort.

However, I couldn't get over the fact that the sound was very low quality and actually sounded monaural.

There weren't nearly enough spell/ability sound effects. Very little impact effects.

The music wasn't very Final Fantasy.

Most of the voice overs sounded awkward.

Sorry to be so critical, but I'm afraid I like the original better. Keep working at it!

Thank you for your honest criticism.
You mentioned that you like the original better, I don't blame you - so do I. I didn't create this in an attempt to outdo SE, as I am a fan of their work personally. I created this piece to have fun, get some practice in and showcase my work (and also get some much needed feedback as to where I can improve).
Similarly, the music is my own and was not intended to copy the Final Fantasy style (although it provided me with a heavy influence, for sure).
I will be taking another pass at the mix eventually, and one of my goals is to improve the stereo mixing, so thank you for pointing that out.

[Lauro]

i like it.... wish we could see more "fan" videos anyone know where ?

[Rhomagus]

i like it.... wish we could see more "fan" videos anyone know where ?

TravelingJake on youtube.

http://www.youtube.com/user/TravelingJake

Still waiting on more...

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