Quote Originally Posted by Alzelia View Post
Thank you for the translations! While don't speak a word of Japanese, I do believe I have some simple advice for your translations. You have a tendency to type in run-on sentences. You should split many of your sentences up. Each sentence should communicate just one thought. Below is a really quick example of one of these run-on sentences and how you could split it up.

I tutored English and writing for freshmen and sophomores in college.
Thanks for the example. I will try to work on them for future translations. Thank you!