Translations (JP to English)

[Alzelia]

Thank you for the translations! While don't speak a word of Japanese, I do believe I have some simple advice for your translations. You have a tendency to type in run-on sentences. You should split many of your sentences up. Each sentence should communicate just one thought. Below is a really quick example of one of these run-on sentences and how you could split it up.

Could be, but previous broadcast they had they the guys on the show wanted to test out how much a core2 duo laptop can handle FFXIV so was thinking it was more on that, but if they showed the benchmark for it, that would be cool for sure

It could be. In a previous broadcast, the guys on the show wanted to test out how a core2 duo laptop would handle FFXIV. So, I was thinking it was more on that. but if they showed the benchmark, that would be cool for sure!

I tutored English and writing for freshmen and sophomores in college.

[Reinheart]

Thank you for the translations! While don't speak a word of Japanese, I do believe I have some simple advice for your translations. You have a tendency to type in run-on sentences. You should split many of your sentences up. Each sentence should communicate just one thought. Below is a really quick example of one of these run-on sentences and how you could split it up.

I tutored English and writing for freshmen and sophomores in college.

Thanks for the example. I will try to work on them for future translations. Thank you!

[Alzelia]

Thanks for the example. I will try to work on them for future translations. Thank you!

I'm curious, what is Japanese grammar like? Are there sentences like English, and other European languages? Is there anything similar to punctuation, commas, periods, colons and such?

[VoltaAsura]

I'm curious, what is Japanese grammar like? Are there sentences like English, and other European languages? Is there anything similar to punctuation, commas, periods, colons and such?

I know this question wasn't directed towards me, but go here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_punctuation I hope that's what you're looking for. (in that article a period is referred to as a "fullstop".)

and also this was an interesting read (since I don't know Japanese either :P)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_language