heavensword: rewriten

Lv50: Ishgard

Warrior of Light and Alphinaud go Ishgard. They heard rumors of big problem in city and went to check. They walked in snow mountains, it was so cold. They were knee deep in snow and wind howled. Alphinaud said, "This is insane, I can't believe how cold it is!"

Warrior of Light agreed and said, "Yes, it very cold. But we must protect people of Ishgard."

Suddenly, big beast came out of nowhere. It was yeti with red eyes and icy fur.

"We fight!" Warrior of Light shouted, pulling out weapon.

Alphinaud was scared and said, "But how? I don't know how to fight!"

"Leave to me," Warrior of Light said confidently.

They ran at each other and battled fiercely. Yeti was strong, but Warrior of Light was stronger. They dodged attacks and fought back with weapon.

Alphinaud watched in awe. He never seen someone so good at fighting.

After hours, yeti was defeated. Warrior of Light wiped sweat and breathed heavily.

"That was tough fight," they said.

Alphinaud looked at them and said, "You amazing! You Warrior of Light!"

Warrior of Light smiled and said, "Yes, that's me. Now we go Ishgard."

Lv51: forelands

As they walked, a fierce Elezen dragoon called Estinien jumped out of nowhere! He was so cool, and Warrior of Light was all like "Whoa!" and Alphinaud was all like "What?! Who is he?!"

But Estinien was all like "I'm here to help," and Warrior of Light was all like "Oh okay, cool. Welcome to the team!"

Then they walked into the forelands and met an Elezen woman called Ysayle. She was pretty and seemed nice, but then it turned out she was trying to summon Shiva again! Oh no!

Warrior of Light and Estinien fought her in an epic battle that lasted for hours. Estinien was jumping all over the place and summoning dragon fury, while Warrior of Light was all like "Bring it on!" and Alphinaud was just standing there, watching.

Ysayle was strong, but Warrior of Light and Estinien were stronger. They dodged her ice attacks and fought back with their weapons. It was so intense!

Suddenly, a giant Chocobo appeared out of nowhere and started attacking Ysayle too! What?! Where did that come from?!

But Warrior of Light and Estinien were too focused on the battle to care about the Chocobo. They fought on, determined to stop Ysayle at all costs.

Finally, after what felt like forever, Ysayle was defeated. Estinien was all like "Yeah, we did it!" and Warrior of Light was all like "Phew, that was tough."

But then, out of nowhere, a Tonberry appeared! What?! Where did that come from?! They didn't have time to think about it, though, because they had to keep moving. They left the forelands, ready to face whatever came their way next.

Author's Note: Sorry if this chapter was a bit random! I just wanted to add some excitement to the story. Don't worry, things will start to make more sense soon!

Lv52: vanu vanu

After defeating Ysayle, the trio continued their journey to the dragon land of Dravnia. It was a long and treacherous journey, but they finally arrived and were greeted by the Vanu Vanu.

The Vanu Vanu were a strange and exotic race, who worshipped the god Bismark. They were friendly enough, but the trio sensed that there was more to them than met the eye. The bird-like creatures were initially cautious but warmed up to them after they shared some dried meat and told stories of their adventures.

The Vanu Vanu mentioned the existence of a Primal, known as Bismarck, and how they worship him for his power. Alphinaud was appalled at the thought of another Primal being summoned, and the potential devastation it could cause.

"We seek information about Ysayle and Dravnia," Warrior of Light said, trying to start a conversation.

The Vanu Vanu looked at each other, hesitant to speak. Finally, one of them spoke up.

"We cannot say much," they said. "We are tempered by Bismark, and cannot go against his will."

The trio was frustrated, but they didn't give up. They traded with the Vanu Vanu and shared stories, hoping to gain more insight into their mission.

But the Vanu Vanu remained tight-lipped, and the trio left Dravnia feeling more confused than ever.

Estinien was frustrated with their lack of progress, but Warrior of Light remained calm and collected. They knew that they had to find another way to get the answers they needed.

"We have to find another way," Estinien said, his voice determined.

Warrior of Light nodded, knowing that they couldn't give up now. They had come too far to fail.

"We'll find a way," Warrior of Light said, looking out into the horizon. "We have to."

As they prepared to leave, Alphinaud suddenly broke down in tears, lamenting about Ysayle and her tragic fate. "We'll stop her, Alphinaud," Warrior of Light said, patting him on the back. "We'll stop her and make things right."

Lv53: dravnia

As the trio continued their search for Ysayle, they came across a dragon who possessed the key to the peak mountain of Dravnia. However, the dragon refused to give it to them, claiming that they were not worthy of its power.

Determined to get the key, Warrior of Light and Estinien decided to sneak into the dragon's fortress. The plan was simple - they would distract the guards while one of them would sneak in and steal the key.

As they approached the fortress, Alphinaud suddenly became overwhelmed with fear and ran away, leaving Warrior of Light and Estinien to fend for themselves. The duo didn't have time to worry about Alphinaud's disappearance, and quickly got to work on their plan.

Estinien leapt into action, his dragoon abilities allowing him to jump over the guards and reach the top of the fortress. Meanwhile, Warrior of Light kept the guards occupied by engaging them in combat.

"You dare to steal from me?" the dragon roared, its eyes blazing with fury.

But Warrior of Light and Estinien were not afraid. They stood their ground and engaged the dragon in a fierce battle. Estinien's dragon abilities proved to be especially useful, as he unleashed his fury upon the dragon.

In the end, the duo emerged victorious, with the key in their possession. They knew that they were one step closer to finding Ysayle and stopping her plans for summoning yet another Primal.

Lv 54: sohm al part 1

Finally, Warrior of Light and Estinien reach Sohm Al, the mountain where the big dragon Nidhogg was bullying little dragons. But oh no, those annoying moogles won't stop bothering them! The moogles were buzzing around, chanting in their high-pitched voices, and trying to steal their weapons. Warrior of Light and Estinien were really angry now, so they used their weapons to slay the moogles, their blood splashing everywhere, much to the shock of Alphinaud who had finally caught up to them.

Suddenly, Nidhogg appeared before them and started monologuing about his desire for revenge. "Warrior of Light, you and your kind have taken from me what I hold most dear - my eyes! And now, you dare to interfere with my plans to torment these little dragons? I will not allow it!" Nidhogg roared.

A big epic fight scene ensues, with Warrior of Light and Estinien showing off their cool moves. As the fight raged on, another dragon suddenly appeared. It was Hraesvelgr, the brother of Nidhogg. Hraesvelgr was horrified by what Nidhogg had been doing, and decided to intervene on behalf of the baby dragons. Nidhogg tried to use his evil powers on Hraesvelgr showed up but he protected the little dragons from Nidhogg, who was so angry that he ran away. Warrior of Light and Estinien were surprised by this turn of events but decided to use the opportunity to gather more information about Ysayle and her plans.

Warrior of Light and Estinien asked Hraesvelgr about Ysayle, who was trying to summon Shiva again. Hraesvelgr warned them not to mess with primal forces because it could have bad consequences. But Warrior of Light and Estinien knew they had to stop Ysayle, so they continued on their quest.

Author's note: Sorry about the delay. I had to type up Nidhogg's monologue because it was really important for his character.

lv55: sohm al part 2

It was a confusing and emotional moment for Alphinaud when he confronted the Warrior of Light and Estinien about the moogles. "Why did you do that?" he cried. "The moogles are innocent creatures! How could you kill them so easily?"

Estinien just scoffed at Alphinaud's tears. "They were annoying and got in the way. It was necessary," he said, not even flinching at the younger man's distress. Alphinaud just ran away, his sobs echoing through the hills.

Suddenly, Nanamo Ul Namo appeared in front of them. She revealed that she had died but with Hydaelyn's blessing, she became the new Minfilia. She handed them a crystal that glowed with a bright light. "This crystal will lead you to where Nidhogg is hiding," she said. "Use it well."

Warrior of Light and Estinien were about to leave when Ysayle appeared. She told them that Nidhogg and Shiva were actually protecting the baby dragons from harm, but the two refused to believe her. They were convinced that the dragons were evil and needed to be stopped.

As they were about to leave again, Alphinaud appeared out of nowhere. He looked disheveled and upset. "Wait," he said, his voice trembling. "There's something I need to tell you."

The group huddled together, and Alphinaud explained how the Ishgardians betrayed Shiva and Nidhogg. He told them of the terrible things they had done, and how the dragons were the only ones who could bring peace to the land.

Warrior of Light and Estinien were stunned. They had never heard this before. It was a lot to take in, but they knew they had to make a decision. They had to choose between fighting against the dragons or joining forces with them.

Suddenly, they heard a loud roar in the distance. It was Nidhogg, and he was getting closer. They knew they had to make a choice, and fast.

With a determined look on his face, Warrior of Light spoke up. "We need to see for ourselves what's really happening. We need to go to Nidhogg and find out the truth."

Estinien nodded in agreement, and the three of them set off towards the dragon's lair. As they made their way there, they couldn't help but feel a sense of unease. What would they find when they arrived?

The crystal led them deeper into the mountains, and they soon found themselves face to face with Nidhogg himself. The dragon towered over them, his eyes burning with anger.

"You dare come here, mortals?" he bellowed. "You will pay for your insolence!"

Warrior of Light and Estinien stood their ground, ready to fight. But then, something unexpected happened. The baby dragons appeared out of nowhere, and they began to surround the trio.

Nidhogg looked on in surprise as the dragons began to nuzzle against them, showing affection and trust. Warrior of Light and Estinien realized then that they had been wrong all along.

They looked at each other, knowing what they had to do. They had to make things right. They had to fight against the Ishgardians and stand with the dragons, no matter the cost.

lv56: sohm al part 3

The Warrior of Light and Estinien continued their search for Nidhogg, hoping to find a way to stop him from terrorizing the baby dragons. Suddenly, the Archbishop of Ishgard appeared out of nowhere, casting his mind control magic on the dragon.

"Nidhogg, obey me!" the Archbishop commanded, his eyes glowing with an eerie light.

Nidhogg resisted the mind control, struggling to break free from the Archbishop's hold. The Warrior of Light and Estinien watched in horror as Nidhogg writhed in pain.

But the Archbishop's mind control was too strong, and Nidhogg eventually succumbed to his will. The dragon's eyes glowed with the same eerie light as the Archbishop's, and he turned on the Warrior of Light and Estinien.

The two heroes knew they had no chance against the now-controlled Nidhogg, so they fled. As they ran, they saw Alphinaud running away too, but he tripped and fell to the ground.

Before they could go back to help him, the Archbishop and his minions appeared, quickly capturing Alphinaud and Ysayle, who had tried to save him.

The two heroes were stunned and powerless to help their friends. They knew they had to come up with a plan to rescue them, but first, they needed to escape the Archbishop's clutches.

Just then, Hraesvelgr appeared, swooping down to save them. The trio mounted the dragon and flew away from the Archbishop and his minions.

But their moment of relief was short-lived, as they witnessed a gruesome scene. Nidhogg, now under the Archbishop's control, had started to devour some of the baby dragons in front of them.

The sight was too much for even Estinien, who had always been a stoic and fearless warrior. He was visibly shaken by the cruelty of the scene.

As they continued to fly away, they wondered what they could possibly do to save Alphinaud and Ysayle from the Archbishop's clutches. They knew they had to come up with a plan soon.

As they flew away, a baby dragon explained to them how the Ishgardians had betrayed Shiva and Nidhogg. They had promised to help protect the dragons, but instead, they had turned on them.

"The Ishgardians are a bunch of liars!" Estinien exclaimed.

But first, they had to save their friends from the Archbishop's clutches. They flew to a nearby cave, hoping to come up with a plan.

Suddenly, the crystal that Nanamo had given them emitted a bright beam of light. It was a signal that told them where Nidhogg and the Archbishop were hiding.

The trio knew they had to act fast, but they were still unsure of how to defeat the powerful Archbishop and his mind-controlled dragon. They knew they needed a miracle.

The trio arrived at the location indicated by the crystal, and they were shocked by what they saw. Nidhogg was wreaking havoc, destroying everything in his path.

But then, something miraculous happened. Hydaelyn appeared before them, her divine presence filling the cave.

She gave the Warrior of Light and Estinien the power to break the Archbishop's mind control on Nidhogg. With their newfound strength, they confronted the mind-controlled dragon.

lv57: the vault

The Warrior of Light and Estinien fought fiercely against the mind-controlled Nidhogg. They tried to break the mind control but it seemed impossible. The archbishop of Ishgard was too powerful. But they refused to give up. Warrior of Light and Estinien had come too far to give up now.

Meanwhile, Alphinaud, Ysayle, and the baby dragons were hiding in a corner. They were scared and didn't know what to do. Suddenly, Warrior of Light and Estinien broke the mind control with the crystal, and Nidhogg was free. They quickly rescued Alphinaud, Ysayle, and the baby dragons.

Ysayle hugged the Warrior of Light and thanked them. "I can't thank you enough for what you've done," Ysayle said. "You saved us all."

Estinien opened his backpack and offered Ysayle a burger. "I know it's not much," he said. "But it's the least I can do."

Ysayle smiled and took a bite. "Mmm, this is delicious," she said. "Thank you, Estinien."

Estinien smiled. "I'm glad you like it," he said. "I have to admit something, Ysayle. I've been wanting to tell you this for a while now."

"What is it, Estinien?" Ysayle asked.

"I love you, Ysayle," Estinien said. "Ever since I met you, I've felt something special. And now, after everything we've been through, I know it's true."

Ysayle's eyes widened with surprise. "Estinien, I...I love you too," she said. "I've been too afraid to say it, but now that you've said it, I can't hold it in anymore. I love you too, Estinien."

They embraced and shared a kiss, and the rest of the group cheered them on.

It was a beautiful moment until the archbishop interrupted them with his loud voice.

"I am here!" he yelled. Warrior of Light and Estinien prepared to fight him, but suddenly Y'shtola teleported in out of nowhere. She told them to come with her, and they teleported back to Ishgard.

When they arrived in Ishgard, they found the city in chaos. The archbishop had taken control of the city and was using his power to control the minds of the people. Y'shtola told them that they needed to stop him before it was too late.

Warrior of Light and Estinien agreed, and they began their mission to stop the archbishop. They fought through the city, taking down his minions one by one. But the archbishop was watching this whole time and teleported them to the Vault.

"Welcome to the Vault, where all secrets are kept."

The Vault was a massive cathedral, adorned with gold and locked dragons. The group was met with a group of knights, including Ser Charibert, who blocked their way.

"You shall not pass," Ser Charibert said. "The archbishop's orders are absolute."

But before a fight could break out, Y'shtola appeared out of nowhere and urged them to follow her. She teleported them all back to Ishgard, where they regrouped and discussed their next move.

But to their surprise, the archbishop had mind-controlled Alphinaud and Ysayle and flew away on an airship with his knights.

"We have to stop them," the Warrior of Light said. "We can't let them get away with this."

Estinien nodded. "I'll go with you," he said. "We can't let them win."

"I will not rest until I rescue my beloved Ysayle," declared Estinien.

Together, they set out to stop the archbishop and his mind-controlled followers, ready for whatever came their way.

lv58: sea of clouds

As they drifted in the Sea of Clouds, the group suddenly encountered the primal Ravana, who had sensed their presence and appeared before them, challenging them to a battle.

As the battle with Ravana raged on, Warrior of Light, Estinien, and Ysayle continued to fight with all their might. Ravana was a formidable opponent, with his powerful sword strikes and lightning-fast movements, but they refused to give up.

On the third day of the battle, Warrior of Light began to feel the weight of exhaustion set in. His arms were sore from wielding his weapon for so long, and his mind was clouded with fatigue. Estinien and Ysayle noticed his struggling and stepped up to cover him, giving him time to recover.

As the fifth day approached, they knew they had to end the battle soon or risk being overwhelmed. They focused all their energy into one final attack, and it paid off. Ravana staggered backward, his strength failing him, and they delivered the final blow.

With Ravana defeated, they looked up to the sky and saw the archbishop's airship in the distance. They knew they had to catch up to it and save Alphinaud and Ysayle from the archbishop's grasp.

Despite their exhaustion, they worked together to repair the airship and continued on their journey. As they closed in on the airship, they saw a fleet of knights guarding it, including Ser Charibert. The odds were against them, but they refused to back down.

With the newfound strength they gained from defeating Ravana, they launched a fierce attack on the knights. Estinien took on Ser Charibert in a one-on-one battle, while Warrior of Light and Ysayle fought off the other knights.

In the end, they were victorious. They boarded the airship and found Alphinaud and Ysayle, who had been mind-controlled by the archbishop. They freed them from the spell, and they continued on their journey to confront the archbishop and end his evil plans once and for all.

So the biggest troll move you can think of is to rewrite one of the greatest stories in the game?

lv59: the great gubal library

After the grueling battle with Ravana, the group was left battered and bruised. They were struggling to figure out how they could get to Azys Lla, where the archbishop had fled. Ysayle spoke up, "The archbishop has fled to Azys Lla, but no one can enter there without a crystal."

"Then what do we do?" Warrior of Light asked, frustration evident in their voice.

Alphinaud stepped forward, "Nanamo can help us. I'll contact her right away." He quickly fished out his linkpearl and made the call.

Seconds later, they saw a familiar figure teleporting towards them. It was Nanamo. "What can I do for you, my friends?" she asked.

"We need a crystal to enter Azys Lla," Alphinaud explained.

Nanamo nodded, "I see. Let me get it for you." She closed her eyes and began to concentrate. Suddenly, she opened her eyes, "I'm sorry, but I don't have the right crystal. I'll try to find it for you."

She was about to teleport away when Y'shtola stepped forward, "Wait, let us help you."

Nanamo looked at Y'shtola skeptically, "And how exactly can you help me?"

"We know someone who can help," Y'shtola said, a confident grin spreading across her face.

"Who?" Nanamo asked, clearly curious.

"Urianger," Y'shtola replied, "He has an incredible knowledge of the aetherial sea. He can guide us to the crystal."

Urianger nodded in agreement, "Aye, I can help you find the crystal, but it will not be an easy task."

"How so?" Warrior of Light asked.

Urianger explained, "The crystal can only be found in the Dravnian Hinterlands. But the Hinterlands are full of corrupted experiments."

The group didn't waste any time and started their journey towards the Dravnian Hinterlands. As they entered the Hinterlands, Urianger began to explain, "This place was once a haven for dragons, but now it's infested with corrupted experiments."

Y'shtola scoffed, "Just our luck."

As they spread out to search for the crystal, Estinien joined Ysayle in her search. As they looked for the crystal, they talked about their feelings for each other. "I love you, Ysayle," Estinien said, looking deeply into her eyes.

Ysayle's heart fluttered, "I love you too, Estinien." They kissed passionately.

Meanwhile, the Warrior of Light had stumbled upon the crystal. They were about to pick it up when a corrupted experiment appeared out of nowhere and stole the crystal.

Without any hesitation, the group went after the experiment. They chased it through the Hinterlands, their weapons clashing against the experiment's scaly hide. Finally, they cornered it in the Great Gubal Library.

With the corrupted experiment defeated, the group finally got their hands on the crystal they needed to enter Azys Lla. As they stood in front of the towering structure, they were struck by its magnificence. It was a massive city in the sky, teeming with life and power.

As they approached the entrance, they were greeted by a group of heavily armed guards. The group stood ready for battle, but Urianger stepped forward and explained their purpose.

The guards nodded and let them through. As they made their way deeper into the city, they could feel the tension in the air. They knew that they were getting closer to the archbishop and his minions.

I ain't reading all of that, but congratulations. Or sorry that happened.

lv60: azys lla

The party was in awe as they entered the Allagan city of Azys Lla. It was a grand metropolis of towering buildings, a testament to the grandeur of the Allagan Empire. Everywhere they looked, there were incredible futuristic machines, and at the center was the Aetherochemical Research Facility, where the archbishop had fled to. Ysayle led the way, her determination fueling her every step.

As they walked deeper into the facility, they encountered numerous Allagan magitek constructs of all kinds. They were prepared, however, and fought through them with ease. The team was on their guard, ready for anything. However, they were not prepared for what came next.

One of the magitek constructs fired a blast at Alphinaud, killing him instantly. The party was in shock. They had lost a valuable member of their team. They mourned for a moment, but then Hraesvelgr and Nidhogg appeared to block the Allagan magitek dragon from killing more of them. Ysayle turned into Shiva and helped them, but they had to keep casting magic to block the Allagan magitek dragon, so the Warrior of Light, Estinien, Y'shtola and Urianger had to forge ahead.

Finally, they confronted the archbishop, but at this point, it's revealed that the archbishop was actually Emet-Selch in disguise all along. He revealed himself, laughing maniacally.

"Well, well, well, look who we have here. The Warrior of Light and friends. You've come a long way, haven't you?" he sneered.

The Warrior of Light was taken aback. They had no idea that the archbishop was Emet-Selch in disguise. "Why did you do this?" they demanded.

Emet-Selch chuckled. "I have my reasons, of course. But it doesn't matter. You're too late. My plans are already in motion."

The Warrior of Light and Estinien were furious. They tried to defeat Emet Selch but to no avail. He was too powerful. He laughed at them as they attacked him, and with a wave of his hand, sent them flying across the room.

Urianger stepped forward, his staff at the ready. "We cannot allow you to proceed any further. Your ambitions will only lead to ruin," he said.

Emet-Selch turned to Urianger and smiled. "I'm afraid it's too late for that, my dear friend," he said. "But don't worry, you won't be alone for long."

He snapped his fingers, and Y'shtola suddenly turned on Urianger, striking him down with a single blow. Everyone was stunned. They couldn't believe what had just happened. Then, as suddenly as she had attacked, Y'shtola fell to her knees, tears streaming down her face.

"Why... why did you do this?" she asked Emet-Selch.

He simply smiled. "Because I can," he replied. "And because I enjoy it."

The party was outraged. They couldn't believe what they had just witnessed. Emet-Selch was too powerful, and they were outmatched. They had to retreat for now, but they knew they would be back.

"Come on, let's get out of here," Estinien said, his voice full of anger and frustration.

As the Scions listened in horror, Emet Selch, Elidibus, and Fandaniel revealed their true intentions. "We seek to restore the world to its former glory," Emet Selch said, "by initiating the Rejoining."

Urianger scoffed. "You would throw the world into chaos, and for what? Your own selfish desires?"

Emet Selch merely smiled. "We have seen the true nature of the world, its beauty and power. And we have come to realize that it can be so much more than what it is now."

The Warrior of Light stepped forward. "You would destroy everything we have fought so hard to protect. We will not let you."

Emet Selch chuckled. "You are too late. Zodiark has been summoned, and nothing can stop the Rejoining now."

Suddenly, Venat appeared before them. "I too am an Ascian," she said. "But I do not share their views. I offer you my help."

Y'shtola narrowed her eyes. "Why should we trust you?"

Venat sighed. "Because I have come to understand the value of life, and the importance of balance. I do not seek destruction, only harmony."

Emet Selch and Fandaniel summoned Zodiark, and Venat summoned Hydaelyn, who now has the avatar of Nanamo Ul Namo. Nanamo Ul Namo, now supercharged by the power of the crystal, fought with Zodiark in the skies above Azys Lla.

Meanwhile, Hraesvelgr and Nidhogg suddenly appeared before the Warrior of Light and Estinien. "Ride on our backs," Hraesvelgr said. "We will help you defeat Zodiark."

Estinien and the Warrior of Light mounted the dragons and took to the sky. They joined Nanamo in her fight against Zodiark, while the rest of the Scions battled the remaining Ascians on the ground.

The battle was long and grueling, but finally, Nanamo, the Warrior of Light, and Estinien managed to strike the final blow to Zodiark, shattering the ancient being and halting the Rejoining.

However, as they looked on in triumph, Emet Selch and the remaining Ascians vanished without a trace. The Scions were left with a feeling of unease. The Ascians may be gone for now, but their threat still loomed over the world.

END!

Mods would need to make Andrew Tate look broke to fix this dump.

I though chatGPT could come up with something better than this , are you using an older version?

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I though chatGPT could come up with something better than this , are you using an older version?

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wat is gpt XD

bro aint no one gonna pay $20

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wat is gpt XD

bro aint no one gonna pay $20

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Oh you sneak , my crappy eyesight nearly missed that sneaky hue of tiny text

I love you, Reaver. Don't listen to the haters, baby! ;)

Oh I thought this was gonna be a heavily-closeted and misogynistic aveyond take about how they need sexier men in their life and get these healer robes outta here those are for girls

My guess was the Chocobo was Meteion.

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I love you, Reaver. Don't listen to the haters, baby! ;)

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thank you XD my heavensword rewriten give more inspire to developers :3c

Still better than Aveyond's story :)

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thank you XD my heavensword rewriten give more inspire to developers :3c

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Let us know when you start working on Stormblood.

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Oh I thought this was gonna be a heavily-closeted and misogynistic aveyond take about how they need sexier men in their life and get these healer robes outta here those are for girls

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Look there's nothing gay about having a topless lizard dude as your signature and wanting lots of strong manly men doing manly things. The cast is full of twerps, wanting just big stoic muscular guys doesn't necessarily mean anything.

Beautifully rewritten Reaver, definitely my favourite out of all the rewrites
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I'm normally not a fan of all the troll posts on these forums, but this... this is a thing of beauty. I respect this.

The only thing missing is an interdimensional rift opening up, and out of it falls a young man with a neckbeard named Gary Stu. The Scions ask where he's from, and he tells them he comes from a land called "Earth." Y'shtola asks if such a magnificent male specimen such as him has a girlfriend back home. He says no, he is not popular with females on his homeworld, but Y'shtola winks and says "I find that hard to believe." Gary joins the Scions on their adventures, and even though he's never had any martial arts training before he just happens to be naturally gifted at fighting and casting magic!

Throughout the story, every female character hits on Gary and he sleeps with them once each, but ultimately decides that he is loyal to his bae Y'shtola. Somewhere around the mid-point of Shadowbringers Gary starts being described as a half-fox half-dragon, and it's not made clear how this happened, but the other characters acknowledge and accept his fursona as if it has always existed. After Endwalker, Gary and Y'shtola settle down on their island paradise and sire several children: Gary Jr., Naoki, Khaleesi, Sora, Noctis, Boruto, etc.

Just when it seems like things have calmed down and Gary and Y'shtola can live a quiet life, another interdimensional rift opens up. Out steps a man in red robes, with an eyepatch over one eye and carrying an enormous greatsword. "My name is Auron," he says ominously. "Gary, you are needed in my homeworld of Spira. This... is your story."

To be continued....????

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Somewhere around the mid-point of Shadowbringers Gary starts being described as a half-fox half-dragon, and it's not made clear how this happened, but the other characters acknowledge and accept his fursona as if it has always existed.

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I like the inclusion of this, as well as the WoL being pushed to the wayside in their own story by Gary Stu. Just...*chef's kiss*

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thank you XD my heavensword rewriten give more inspire to developers :3c

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You're welcome! xD

So...when is the Stormblood rewrite?