Living Dead description revision and clarification needed

Current description:

"Grants the effect of Living Dead.
When HP is reduced to 0 while under the effect of Living Dead, instead of becoming KO'd, your status will change to Walking Dead.
Living Dead Duration: 10s
Additional Effect: Restores HP with each weaponskill successfully delivered or spell cast
Cure Potency: 1500
While under the effect of Walking Dead, most attacks will not lower your HP below 1. If, before the Walking Dead timer runs out, an amount of HP totaling your maximum HP is restored, the effect will change to Undead Rebirth. If this amount is not restored, you will be KO'd.
Walking Dead Duration: 10s
While under the effect of Undead Rebirth, most attacks will not lower your HP below 1.
Undead Rebirth Duration: Time remaining on Walking Dead"

Proposed change, move the Additional Effect and Cure Potency lines to after Walking Dead Duration and add additional text to ensure players understand when the cure additional effect will occur. In Walking Dead section, reorganize or rephrase to ensure better understanding of the effect statuses.

Proposed:
"Grants the effect of Living Dead.
When HP is reduced to 0 while under the effect of Living Dead, instead of becoming KO'd, your status will change to Walking Dead.
Living Dead Duration: 10s
Walking Dead
While under the effect of Walking Dead, most attacks will not lower your HP below 1 and each successful spell cast and weapon skill delivered will restore HP. In addition, if an amount of HP totaling your maximum HP is not restored, you will be KO'd. If this amount is restored, the effect will change to Undead Rebirth.
Cure Potency: 1500
Walking Dead Duration: 10s
Undead Rebirth
While under the effect of Undead Rebirth, most attacks will not lower your HP below 1.
Undead Rebirth Duration: Time remaining on Walking Dead"

As I use this skill pretty much never, does the HP restore portion still occur while under the effect of Undead Rebirth?

The healing only occurs until Undead Rebirth. While in Undead Rebirth, you can still take damage. Not getting below 1HP in that stage of it is irrelevant - because it's going to expire shortly after and you've already healed yourself. So you may as well pretend that the invuln expired altogether. It would be better if Undead Rebirth turned it into a full invuln like Hallowed Ground.