Tonahanu: They're more than just for show─they allow us to sense even the smallest shift the wind's temperament, and that awareness allows us to direct it as we see fit.
Should be: "...shift in the wind's..."
Tonahanu: They're more than just for show─they allow us to sense even the smallest shift the wind's temperament, and that awareness allows us to direct it as we see fit.
Should be: "...shift in the wind's..."