Developing Art Style For A Web Comic

Hi everyone! It's me, Kacho Nacho.

I like to tell stories and my favorite way of doing so is through web comics. I do not have the patience nor the focus for drawing. So, I screenshot scenes from the game.

Afterwards, I fiddle with the shots, mask things, and arrange them in a series of panels which are easy to read. I also like my web comic to have a bit more visual impact than just a series of screenshots.

http://i.imgur.com/uJTsAI8.jpg

What do you think? I want to hear your opinions.

Thanks!

:D