Legacy of the Allagan empire part 2 :)

Legacy of the Allagan empire part 2 :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N0ZT75Z_D3o

The lore community could definitely benefit from videos like these and its awesome that you've taken it upon yourself to make some, but if you don't mind I'd like to offer a few suggestions that I think could improve your videos.

1. The content of your video doesn't match what's being discussed in your voice over. I'd suggest engaging your audience with every tool at your disposal which includes both the visual and audio. So when discussing the Allagans, your video needs to be showing us images and video relating to them. Otherwise, you might be better off redesigning your product as a podcast.
2. Also relating to the video, it includes your UI, chatbox, gear windows, and such. This is kind of like a movie where you can see the boom mic and the behind the scenes staff walking around, which is a no no. I'd recommend disabling your UI for videos like these.
3. On the audio side, your choice of music makes it difficult to hear what you're voice over is saying. This is partly because of the music volume, but also its because the music you've selecting as lyrics. Which means two people are talking at once, making it hard to pay attention.

A great way to improve is to look at what others are doing with similar videos.

Best of luck! I'm looking forward to seeing what you make next.

Crystal tower was built prior Xande being resurected.

Amon, using Crystal tower as for its normal function wich was, creating energy directly from the sun. (even thou, as a big construction, open to public, it was a simbol of allagan prosperity, yet it was a power plant)

Amon (great cientist) did experiments and as allagan empire had started to decay, Amon decided to ressurect Xande, allagans first leader.

Xanded took over the throne again.At some unknown time, Xande turns to cloud of Darkness to gain even more power, but he also needed more aether. As the war in the southern continent of meracydia ended, allagans captured the elder primal bahamuth, built the coil sistem, and then tossed Dalamud in the skies to help creating even more energy than before.

Xande eventually turns CT into a aetherial research facility and a misscalculation in the power(actually, there are 2 theories, either xande wanted more power and overchrged it, or the oposition led by other allagan royalty[probably the same who put the Allagan Eye into G'rashta bloodline] sabotaged it)

This made an earthquake that put an end to the 4th astral era, starting the 4th umbral era.

(im sorry i dont have time to watch the rest of your video but will defently do later on!)

And, despite what i said above, its nice to see people doing this kind of videos!

Where did u get this information??? i never found anything that mentioned those?
What i found was that xande ordered the contruction of the building after he made a pact with the voidsent. The building was as u mentioned display of power but at the same time was built as a generator to distripute the energy to the empire. Did i get it wrong?
Also xande dickslapped bahamut in the face and put him inside the sattelite so that it would work as... well like a giant solar panel.
The building was never supposed the generate but more like a giant battery.???

I will improve my next video. That you can be certain of:D

As funny it might seem, we found the answer in this topic : http://forum.square-enix.com/ffxiv/t...ilers%29/page2

syrcus tower quest, 2nd cutcene.

on off topic: oh youre from lich!

If you are going to do a lore video you need to be 100% sure of what you are going to said and if you dont you need to let s know that what you are saing is just an speculation, theory, etc
I couldnt really understand anything, you need to improve your audio quality.

I'm sure you know Ethys Asher, ask questions to him. He is a super lore guy, you can learn some things from him