Journal, "Shot Through the Heart" -- Text -- Incorrect Comma in Entry
When the player starts the "Shot Through the Heart" sidequest and observes the first journal entry, the following text appears on the second line:
"
supposed involvement in the recent sinking of the galley, Braveheart, but to do so, he
"
This is incorrect because the noun "Braveheart" is restrictive in this context, as it adds essential information about the noun it is accompanying, "galley". As currently written, this is suggesting that the Braveheart is the only galley in existence.
Please fix this issue by removing the comma that appears before "Braveheart" on the second line.
The corrected text would read as follows:
"
supposed involvement in the recent sinking of the galley Braveheart, but to do so, he
"
NOTE: This text may appear twice and should be addressed in both locations. Thank you.
Steps to Reproduce:
1) Start the game...
2) Start the "Shot Through the Heart" sidequest by speaking to Mynadaeg.
3) Open the Journal through the Main Menu and obserbve the text that appears.