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I liked your pic for what its worth! ^_^ Both are great, the one submitted and this alternate!
Thank you, Rongi. <3 Our lord and savior evermore!
Why is it my posts that always start on the bottom of one page and end up at the top of another? XD
I actually much prefer this too. For one, the dark setting and colors much better suit the theme, that bland empty sky really did nothing for you in the shot you submitted. You are in fact more emphasized as the back element of this alternate shot than you are as the front element of the shot you submitted.
Front page updated.
XD Every way I look at that one I seem so tiny and unimportant at the back... Looks like this is a case of where a mentor would have helped.
From the judge in me:
I see good in both pictures. the second one you posted tells more of a story.
* having you centered, puts you in the power position with your "minions" on each side. * Even though you are in the back the framing pulls the eye towards you because of the triangle shape (wide at bottom and everything positioned staggered till we see you in the center)
* There is also the symmetry thing you have going on and your soldiers dont pull focus off you..
these little things all are appealing to the eye and thus people are drawn to this picture more than the other. does that make sense?
From the model in me:
It's easy to get tunnel visioned with your own work. everything starts to not work and it's hard sometimes to put an objective eye on it. So then you second guess everything you do. but like i said both pictures were good. So dont beat yourself up. At least you now have some perspective and you know you have the shots you need in you <3
as for the mentor thing.. im still on the fence about it, but having a sounding board is definitely a plus.. dont be afraid to talk to the cycle 4 models no one will throw you under the bus and will help :)
Tinsley is spot on with that review :) Makes me look forward to (And fear xD) her reviews of my shots in YT2
A sounding board would be so nice *le sigh*. I get what you mean. *nod* Thank you, Tinsley!
Adaaaaam! You've been missing for a while now! Are you receiving my emails? Just give me a heads up if you are busy, and until when so I can stop freaking out about you!
Tinsley said she is busy at work for the next two days, so I know not to expect anything from her, and Katarh is at the Convention, so I know she is busy as well.
I didn't even notice that my icon is a Moogle...
Edit: Uh. Was. Dang, this uploads funkily
How about Entm = Eien Nakama Tyriont Mirai? >_>
When my helpers in my fc or my bf were not enough, I started badgering Brun. She especially helped making the last picture I had to take better with her feedback and help.
For us YT2 models, we had 6 weeks to take all 12 rounds and extra pictures and I'd say at the last 3 I was in a major slump and did not like my own pictures and ideas at all anymore. This is when outside opinions are super helpful. Brun helped with the polish and the mentors were surprisingly positive, lifting my spirits again.
Lesson learned: Don't try to barrel through this competition completely on your own. Even without the mentor system especially in your cycle with many veterans and now with the big skype chat you have a lot of experienced people around you, that surely will give you a hand if you ask nicely. :)
Arrrrgrh, another tight round! ;_;
Outtakes! Kinda!
The first one was my original submission... Pretty, but I couldn't find myself finding anything really... good about it.
http://i.imgur.com/D5FnMGB.jpg
This one is most DEFINITELY not safe for work! I was, uh, messing around with the screens and ended up getting a very risqué shot...
Big thanks to my pals and my awesome FC-mates of The Moogle Conspiracy for helping out with my shot for this round! Felt bad I ended up using a shot that only had four of 'em in there, tho', as there were a bunch of 'em there. Afterwards, we all marched out and had some group shots for fun. Freaked a few people out, I think. ;) Pics from that can be found clicking here, but here's a quick behind-the-scenes, thank-you shot:
http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/...pshs9ba2xz.png
Haha, nice shots, both of them Brun! But I think you made the right choice with the shot you went with! <3
And I know what you mean Steph! I had so many extras with some of my shots... Actually I should add a shout out to them in my Imgur Albums to be released after each round!
So much pressure! @_@ Outtakes time! Or should I just say shots that didn't make the final cut?
My personal favorite, but when I asked people to help choose nobody picked it.
I loved the background on this but my character got lost in a bad way.
Wow! I absolutely love this shot! Me personally, I think it's much better than the one you submitted. Your lighting draws much more attention to you, that is that even an aetheryte near you? idk.. but who cares b/c you're so well lit! I love that the weather is clear and you can see more of the background, it brings so much more depth and dynamic to the shot, and your framing is so dead on! I'm so in love with this shot now! <3
I know, I really liked it but as more people told me either the first or last shot was their favorite I started to think there must be something wrong with what I was seeing.
So, before I was eliminated, I was playing with this concept for almost a month. One set was unusable because it wasn't clearly in RT, so I threw it up on Tumblr and it became reblogged like 50 times, hahaha.
I gave a rock concert in Mor Dhona.
And this includes the most epic screenshot I have ever taken:
That is an awesome shot Kat! It's gorgeous!
Seconded! Absolutely amazing shots Katarh! And the return of the waymark could not be timed better! It fits perfectly!
Here's one of my rejected shots for this round:
Loved it, but the only thing fitting the theme was the background. Otherwise, it could have been taken anyplace with a Postmoogle.
Still incredibly cute but yes, it's a weaker theme.
Looks like I'll be the next to go! Still, top 5 is awesome!!! ^_^
I hope you guys enjoyed my portfolio!
A mysterious woman looking out a window, the odd use of a Dungeon Entrance Teleport thing, a Cosmo Canyon Throwback, an Action Shot/Scenic Shot combined in one, and, finally, a very strange concept that forced focus on the most used item in all of FFXIV - The Aetheryte Crystals. Unfortunately, this last shot is a great example of "cool concept, weak photo." T^T But i'd love to see someone take it, and turn it into an amazing shot with better gear and weather...just for kicks! :D
Thank you for the great run, and good luck to the other models! This cycle has been fierce!
Edit: Hearing all the different ways you guys would better my picture, I realize didn't fail at the concept part of the shoot...just the photo part! ((In reference to the Skype conversation.)) I can rest easy knowing I at least had an awesome concept.
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...Sailor Merkur was a dungeon entrance?! T_T I was assuming it was a waterfall... I feel so stupid. Delayed props to you for being so creative!
It's sad to probably see you go. Looking back you were one of the most experiment-happy, risk-taking models this cycle and that breaks new ground for all of us I think. Models will learn from it for the future, pick up ideas and refine themselves. I think that's how ENTM always gets better and better!
he totally stole that idea from me in cycle 2 :p this was one of my submitted shots for the finals (posted in the discussion forum because i got bumped right before *sad face*)
http://i.imgur.com/whUYIRo.jpg
love you Rongi, it's all about the pose...
I wish I could fast forward time to next week because I want to see YouTube Cycle 2 staaart what am I to do with myself until then?
Brun-chan, where in the world was your shot taken? I've never seen those surroundings before, and I meant to ask earlier but I've been working hard to prepare before expansion (no more relic drops gained but got CRP to 50 tonight with the help of an fc mate!!)
I'm pretty sure its in the Rowena complex. Bumpilicious.
Found him! Figured out why I hadn't seen him before too. ^.^'>
Man, inspiration struck for the next round at the last minute after weeks of no clue what I would do.
Made a party finder to advertise our competition over on Sarg; hopefully it'll increase traffic.