Ba Go's Behest - Awkward Sentence

Date:
5/12/2014

Character Name:
Dalimin Dataru

World:
Hyperion

Quest Name:
A Meal Fit for a Fugleman

NPC Quest Giver:
789th Order Dustman Bo Bu

Quest Start Location:
La Noscea at Outer La Noscea (21-18)

Steps:
Complete the quest "Ba Go's Behest" given by 789th Order Dustman Bo Bu
Outer La Noscea at Outer La Noscea (21-18)

In the journal log, find the quest and examine the first sentence of the 3rd journal paragraph for the quest reads as follows;
"Your opponents having fallen, you have the rare soulstone and doblyn shell sought by Ba Go in hand."

Not sure if that is proper... if anything it is awkward.
Perhaps it was meant to be...
"Having fallen your opponents, you have the rare soulstone and doblyn shell sought by Ba Go in hand."
Or
"Your opponents have fallen, you have the rare soulstone and doblyn shell sought by Ba Go in hand."

It's Ye Olde English. It sounds weird because we don't use that type of English today.