English Proofreading

[Kylos]

Dear SquareEnix,

It has become clear over the past year or two that your English proofreading is lacking. As an editor for a news site, I would be happy to offer my editing skills if you are in need. Let's take the latest update notes as an example:

Odyssey has undergone the following aditions and adjustments.

Players can now earn additional mog segments by examining the Otherworldly Vortex in Sheol A, B, or C based on the number of mod segments they have earned during that foray.

Effects of the Moh Amplifier Status
The amount of reinforcement points earned during battles in Odyssey’s Sheol: Gaol will be increased.

The issue with an incorrect item name.

Pre-adjustment → Post-adjustment
Gledi’s Greaves → Gledi’s Breeches

The above correction is wrong in both pre-adjustment and post-adjustment. The set is called "Gleti's", not Gledi's.

I would offer editing free of charge, just be sure to contact me and we can arrange something if you desire. Have someone private message me on FFXIah.com if you are unable to do so here. Thank you.