RR 30%, Kamome 10%, Qirmiz 5%, Loki's 5% = 50% unless that was a typo that you're not hitting Crit Damage Cap with Loki's.

Iga Ningi +2 is definitely better outside of abyssea, I'd still use Loki's inside of Abyssea though.

And B/O. Kotes are generally going to be better that anything else except maybe Relic gloves at night. Other than those two things I agree with Mojo.