the amount of traits alone is an insta never going to happen.
rdms current trait list. Am mount of Traits 20
your list has 27

now breaking down your list VS all other jobs with same traits.

You've given it the same level Fencer as a War * never going to happen its the king of all things offensive.* and done so at an earlier level then war.

you added pld's Defense bonus *why i have no idea def means nothing*

Reduced 5-10 levels off MDB and MAB * puts blm spells in the same level range as rdms*

the attack boost traiti is meh they might give you guys it anyways by 99

"magic" traits fencer/ warlock would be abused by your infinite loop JA swap.

either way you missed the big glaring hole in melee red while trying to mooch fencer.

Combat Skill Ratings
Skill Skill Ranking
Dagger B
Sword B

you'll need at least the A- other jobs have in that category or an obscene amount of ACC in gear to make up for the once 25 levels A tank skills got to the now 35 each A rank gets each 5 levels. let alone the attack lost.

not gonna point out any more glaring holes in your logic , but you should have posted this in the rdm section.