MakkotoParinne
12-04-2013, 09:49 AM
Hello. :)
I noticed, while clicking the maw in Sauromugue Champaign (S), that some of the text dialogue of my Fellow was punctuated improperly. She has a Lively personality.
"Henrietta: Parinne?! Hey, wait!
Henrietta: Boy am I glad to see you here!"
There should be a comma after "Boy", denoting a pause after the interjection.
After mentioning wandering about for Goddess knows how long, she then says:
"Henrietta: There's a way to go back, right Parinne?"
There should be a comma after "right".
After holding the pure white feather aloft, she then says:
"Henrietta: Hey, what happened?!
Henrietta: Hey, I know this place! We're back aren't we?!"
There should be a comma after "back".
This really isn't a big deal at all, but I thought I'd mention as it happened. :)
I noticed, while clicking the maw in Sauromugue Champaign (S), that some of the text dialogue of my Fellow was punctuated improperly. She has a Lively personality.
"Henrietta: Parinne?! Hey, wait!
Henrietta: Boy am I glad to see you here!"
There should be a comma after "Boy", denoting a pause after the interjection.
After mentioning wandering about for Goddess knows how long, she then says:
"Henrietta: There's a way to go back, right Parinne?"
There should be a comma after "right".
After holding the pure white feather aloft, she then says:
"Henrietta: Hey, what happened?!
Henrietta: Hey, I know this place! We're back aren't we?!"
There should be a comma after "back".
This really isn't a big deal at all, but I thought I'd mention as it happened. :)