Sigyn's Visor

[Byrth]

Hello!

Sigyn's Visor's Subtle Blow is missing its T in the English version, as you can see here:
http://wiki.bluegartr.com/bg/Sigyn%27s_Visor

Have a nice day!

[Byrth]

Also, I appreciate that you used the correct possessive apostrophe in Ares' Mask +1 (compared to Ares's Mask), but maybe now it's necessary to correct the old versions too?

Edit: Just noticed that you did this already. Thank you!

[Arcon]

Ares's is not technically wrong, and preferred by many people (including me) and even recommend by several institutions and organisations. That way -s' indicates the plural quantity unambiguously. I'd prefer if they fixed the new version, and some older items (I'm looking at you, Hermes' Sandals).

[Byrth]

Okay, but another error:
Marduk's Shalwar +1 is missing the "+1" in its item description. It simply claims to be Marduk's Shalwar.


Also, using s' or x' on a singular word (especially proper nouns that are by definition singular, like Hermes and Ares) is entirely unambiguous. There isn't a plural form of the word, so there isn't a plural possessive.

[Byrth]

Storage Slip 14's description reads:
"This slip allows the customer to store one piece of Nyzul Isle II or Einherjar II armor with the porter moogle."

Primary issue: It now also allows players to store all 45/99 Salvage II pieces with the porter moogle.


Minor issue/suggestion: If you are running out of space or something, you could considering rephrasing it to be:
"This slip allows the customer to store Nyzul Isle II, Einherjar II, and Salvage II armor with the porter moogle."

The "one piece of" in the description is kind of unnecessary and misleading because you can store up to 127 different armors on the same slip, I think. Besides that, you can store multiple armors at the same time (up to 7) so there's really no reason to say "one piece of."

Anyway! Thanks!

[Elphy]

Okay, but another error:
Marduk's Shalwar +1 is missing the "+1" in its item description. It simply claims to be Marduk's Shalwar.


Also, using s' or x' on a singular word (especially proper nouns that are by definition singular, like Hermes and Ares) is entirely unambiguous. There isn't a plural form of the word, so there isn't a plural possessive.

Wait til I tell Ares Johnson and Ares McNeil that there can only be one Ares. Its gonna get real

;)

[SpankWustler]

Marduk's Shalwar +1 is missing the "+1" in its item description. It simply claims to be Marduk's Shalwar.

Perhaps the piece is ashamed of how little it has improved, and hopes this act of subterfuge will trick the NPC into upgrading it one more time?

[Calatilla]

One thing I've noticed about storage slip 12 also, is that even though it states you can store Nyzul Isle II gear on it, why is it only floor 100 gear that's storable and not all of it?

[Byrth]

Morrigan's Robe +1 is missing its Attack +13 in the English version, but has it in the German Version:

All Races
DEF:55 STR+12 INT+12 MND+12 Accuracy+13 "Magic Attack Bonus"+13 Adds "Refresh" effect Set: Enhances "Magic Atk. Bonus" effect
LV 99 BLM RDM BLU SCH


[Body] All Races
DEF:55 STR+12 INT+12 MND+12 Präzision+13 [B]Attacke+13 „Magieattacken-Bonus“+13 Fügt „Erfrischen“-Effekt hinzu. Set: Verbessert „Magieattacken-Bonus“-Effekt.
LV 99 BLM RDM BLU SCH

[Unelonborro]

Hello comrades!

The Sigyn's Visor issue in the OP has been corrected. You should see the fix in the next patch.
With regards to the other issues brought up in this thread, they have been fixed as per other reports, and the text will be updated in the next patch.

Sorry for the inconvenience, and thank you as ever for keeping watch for us!

Regards,

Unelonborro
Localization Team