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    Eve Knight
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    Balmung
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    Paladin Lv 90

    Typo in Dialogue for Quest "The Value of Silence"

    Tsukumo: We failed to find the bow, but did manage to track down Uchikin's father. I can only hope you search was more fruitful.

    Firstly, "you" instead of "your" is a glaring fault.

    And while we're at it, I think the first comma should be deleted since "did manage to track down Uchikin's father" is a dependent clause. Or you could just stick a second "we" after "but" if you prefer.

    And here's another one later in the same quest:

    Kabuto: Again we have gained a new ally thanks you.

    I'm guessing the intended ending was "thanks to you."
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    Last edited by EveK; 10-19-2017 at 08:11 AM.